Some people say that because of economic progress, government is ignoring other types of progress for a country. To what extent do you think it is correct?
Economic growth of a country ensures its market value on a global platform. To sustain in this era of globalization and commercialization economy plays a significant role. Though economic development is essential for a country's survival, I agree with those who think that other developments are as crucial as economy for the progress of a country.
For a country to promote growth in numerous sectors, it should be financially sustainable. Economy contributes in enhancing job opportunities thereby creating employment. A good financial standing may increase better facilities in various industries such as health, transport, education, infrastructural and tourism. Other than this public amenities and recreational activities will be illuminated by a greater economy. This will in turn be a pragmatic approach in long term as creation of such facilities will generate revenue making a country self-sustainable.
On the other hand, a lot of aspects are overlooked because of economic growth. Social issues that have the potential to integrate the society are pushed off easily. With economy as focal point development in rural areas, small businesses, environmental sustainability and proper consumption of resources are avoided. Most of the people residing in rural areas are unaware of the economic growth and merely work of survival.
To conclude, other types of progress are equally important for the integration of the masses and utilization of resources. Though economy is vital, but ignorance of other developments can create a hindrance in keeping peace and affects the overall development of the nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1376.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 246.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59349593496 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96035189615 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.32458697849 2.80592935109 118% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.609756097561 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.955325959 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.2857142857 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5714285714 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.57142857143 7.06120827912 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179703617325 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573211170208 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074722429682 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112288882268 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0611089955226 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.38 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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