Large shopping malls are replacing small shops. What is your opinion about this?
The notion of establishing shopping malls is to upgrade the standard of living of common people. As a result most of the small and native shops face an economic crisis. In my opinion, introduction of shopping malls is a comprehensive approach to contribute towards the economical growth and for the upliftment of the masses.
The massive constructed shopping complexes are designed to facilitate numerous shops, recreational activities and eateries.A wide range of products are available with attractive schemes and quality assured items. Since, the shops are legally allocated to individual owners, the process of collection taxes becomes free flowing. Malls have secluded and independent stores offering a variety of accessories, footwear, clothing,home decor and technological gadgets from international recognized brands under a single roof. Also, separate parking spaces are available with security surveillance. Not only this, multiplexes offer recreational activities such as children play zones, bowling alleys, cinemas and theaters.
Though malls are planned in accordance to the needs and requirements of the people with a sole purpose of providing different amenities in a defined space, the items available are extravagantly expensive. Also, there is a lot of over crowding during peak days as the footfall is more that expected.
However, there are some groups that prefer to shop from local markets rather than shopping complexes. They believe that shopping complexes is ideal for catering crowd possessing high financial standing. For the common people, the good available are overrated and unreasonable.
At last, initiation of shopping complexes is a pragmatic solution of replenishing the illegal local shops. Also, the facilities and amenities available in malls are incomparable to the existing local shops.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'economic' (=connected with economy)?
Suggestion: economic
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...comparable to the existing local shops.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, such as, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1568.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76470588235 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07173462936 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621323529412 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8545526638 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.533333333 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206973190174 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630905860315 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447172677506 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.108849962766 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.058419833809 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.83 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.33 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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