Nowadays, people have to work for longer hours under stressful conditions. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Suggest some ways by which the job conditions can be improved.
In order to attain social recognition and have a stable financial standing, most of the people work for longer duration under exhausting conditions. There are numerous factors responsible for the work stress an individual undergoes that will be discussed in this essay.
Highly qualified professionals work under stressful and unrealistic conditions for achieving their tasks within the scheduled time constraints. The performance and efficiency of an employee is determined by the seriousness and management of situation in such stressful environment. Employee work in such situations for acquiring high salaries, promotions and to increase job prospects for their future development.
There are several causes that contribute to the enormous working hours. Most of the companies encouraging such practices have an international market value resulting in foreign clients. Due to the difference in time zones, employees often have to work according to the clients working hours. Also, a lot of people lack in proper time management skills and prioritization of the given assignment. As a result, there is always a considerable amount of work pending causing irritation, agitation , anxiety disorders and stress management issues. To add on, this is one of the cause of increasing health issues such as health problems, diabetes, blood pressure, panic attacks and increased cholesterol levels that are highly observed in young professionals.Psychologist suggests that a calm, composed and peaceful mind will always work more efficiently than an overworked one.
To resolve, a realistic solution can be preparing a management plan for the scheduled task before hand and examining the number of people needed to achieve quick outcomes. I agree that working for unfavorable hours under restricted conditions can have adverse effects on society. Hence proper measures should be taken on individual level to improve the existing condition of the working class people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1673.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70989761092 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24197482392 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607508532423 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.9358232846 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.5 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9285714286 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.28571428571 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.289009151423 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0999978350524 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722449287022 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187516584231 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651185509754 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.84 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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