It is a commonly held belief that increasing the number of sports facilities is the most crucial method to foster public health. However, some assert that this manner is insufficient to protect people’s health. Admittedly, I believe that it is not enough to rely on sports equipment solely, owing to a number of compelling reasons.
To begin with, the most rational justification is that sports facilities motivate people to exercise and use their time more sufficient.
The more expanding the number of sports equipment the more people tend to use them and concentrate on their body’s health. Take park sports facilities that offer free exercise for all kinds of people from poverty to wealth as an example. They are extremely useful and adequate to keep the body in fit and deterrent it from illnesses such as heart attack, Blood pressure, and Osteoporosis. That could be an effective and positive step to approach public health aim.
Yet another compelling state is that public health relevant to other axiomatic arguments. The most essential one is public awareness. When knowing health issues and things that pose a threat to their body, people avoid doing them. A good illustration of this is that knowledge to use a large amount of sugar leads them to diseases such as diabetes and obesity. They, consequently, take care of using sugary nutrients. So social media and education play an important role in growing people's awareness and as a result public health. The government, moreover, proves responsible in contrast deprived area’s people to provide free hygienic packets involved soap, shampoo, toothbrush, toothpaste and any kind of sanitary things to protect their health.
In conclusion, considering the points discussed above, the most rational conclusion to be drawn is that, however, an increasing number of sports facilities are effective, from my point of view, there are numerous more important reasons such as people's instruction to grow public health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, in conclusion, in contrast, kind of, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1666.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25552050473 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77334614055 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561514195584 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7916178503 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.125 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0625 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286136152939 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961323889842 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655254299009 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163505779774 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0583060525706 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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