Computers have become a part and parcel of our life. It will not be wrong to say that in the absence of it even for a single day, our work will get stuck. This essay argues how the systems have proved their worth to our life by changing the work style and giving us the era of programming and the internet.
Our dependency on the computer system for work can be understood by their presence in every office, be it small or big. To begin with, data entry is the most common advantage of the computer. For instance, in a hospital, hundreds of entries get logged at ease, moreover, this has removed the maintenance of registers as done in old times. In addition to this, time consumption has been cut off with the use of computers for instance searching in thousands of records in a second, migrating data, etc.
Besides, due to computers, we have got two important objects, programming, and the internet. A human will feel crippled without the internet. From small to big, most of the works need internet like transaction, video calls, online shopping, mobile recharge, etc. On the other hand, programming has just changed the world. Most of the business prefer to provide their products or facilities via mobile application or web app which can be created by programming. This became possible only because of the computer.
Although, the computer was invented to perform calculations with help of the machine. However, it has proved its importance in other fields as well. The essay highlights how the computer brought improvement in our life through its use in the office and for the internet.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ssible only because of the computer. Although, the computer was invented to perform c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, moreover, second, well, for instance, in addition, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8152173913 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66192424474 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590579710145 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.8252044773 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5625 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.122919294707 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0424413349193 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519865516449 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.081487410934 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472602861142 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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