Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient. Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful.
What is your opinion? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
In this globalized eon, without any qualms it is accepted that computer is one of the essential parts of our daily life. Some people coincide that due to the more dependency on the computer; life is more tensed and complicated now. Howbeit, I debunk from them and proffer that computer is the blessings of modern science which make our life more comfortable and handy.
Compelling evidences are obtainable to demonstrate the notion of how the computer is becoming the part and parcel of our everyday life. The paramount concrete reason is due to communication and information technology now World is in our hand. Anyone can reach any corner of the world within in a second. To go hand in hand, supernal rationale which drags me to persist is any business and official work can be accomplished efficiently because of electronic data management. As a result, storing and maintaining is easy rather than paper documents.
What is half full for some, may appear half empty to others, so the public across the board discriminate that computers have their own demerits if overused or negatively used which has myriad of reasons. To commence with, some people reckon that children are too much addicted to computer games rather than other outdoor activities and finally our future generation are becoming more machine-dependent and physically disable. Withal they also justify that computer hard disk crashes and viruses are like natural disasters and make our life miserable without our important data.
To synopsize, I pen down saying that there are innumerable robust factors underpinning the fact that the computer is a wonderful invention of the modern world. Ergo, its contrary can be overlooked or curbed.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...e miserable without our important data. To synopsize, I pen down saying that the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, if, look, may, second, so, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14695340502 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81571731986 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634408602151 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.0676465471 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4615384615 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235509308592 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728549367842 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649477261349 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133176324472 0.151304729494 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0774796236082 0.056905535591 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.