Poaching has become a huge problem in the world causing danger to the existence of animals. Hunting mainly happens due to the trafficking of animals' body parts and sometimes in the name of a hobby, affecting the balance of nature and encouraging criminals.
To begin, poaching is a way to earn money by illegally selling in-demand animal objects, for instance, an elephant's teeth, lion's claws, or skin have always been in demand of rich people. Moreover, people use them at home as a status symbol. Not only this, some go hunting merely for a hobby or sometimes to impress others. Such as, it is not new to hear that celebrities got sued or arrested for hunting endangered wildlife. This also happens due to the response of people, such as instead of criticising the act of hunting, fan following merely like it, giving a wrong message.
After exploring the causes, this paragraph highlights the adverse effects of poaching. Firstly, this imbalances nature as the number of highly hunted creatures goes down quickly. This happens due to the high demand for animals for either medicine or other usage. Recent reports have revealed how quickly the number of species, on the brink of extinction, is increasing. Secondly, this increases the number of illegal crimes and traffickers across the country. Though this affects mainly in developing countries in the absence of strict rules and huge delay in giving final decisions to such criminal cases.
Killing helpless animals for the sake of either money or other selfish objectives is indeed cruel and punishable. Developing countries should get strict and swift actions against this problem and those involved in it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 102, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'imbalances'' or 'imbalance's'?
Suggestion: imbalances'; imbalance's
...erse effects of poaching. Firstly, this imbalances nature as the number of highly hunted c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1399.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10583941606 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60400117133 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620437956204 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.1652606354 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.2666666667 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.26666666667 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1679949692 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0501472020417 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320041609019 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101833893678 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0105273890371 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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