With better technology and improvements, going abroad has become convenient and straightforward. This essay explores the positive sides of travelling across the world, including benefits such as education, business and tourism.
To begin, education field has seen the most positive impacts. Such as most of the students from developing countries prefer to go abroad for higher studies. This is so because of the simple process that is get a passport and student visa. Besides education, people can travel to different countries for the purpose of business merely with their passport and no other complex formalities. For example, one of the relatives went to Australia for business meeting by simply booking online ticket for flight and no extra legal permissions required. Not only this, flights' fare are even feasible to bare for a common man as well.
Apart from business and education, tourism comes as a second big advantage. On one side, whereas people can complete their dream of visiting any country, on the other side, tourism gives a boost to the nation's economy. In addition to this, trips gives experience and knowledge of local customs, traditions, and latest technologies in use. For instance, my cousin visits a new country every year, as a result to his trips and interest, he now knows the basics of four foreign languages.
As discussed above, with travelling across globe having become feasible and uncomplicated, not only nations but also the people have got benefited. Overall, straightforward steps and no complicated formalities have proved foreign trips beneficial for mankind.
- It has become easier and more affordable for people to travel to other countries Do you think it is a positive or a negative development Give your opinion and relevant examples from your experience 61
- The growth of online shopping will one day lead to all shops in towns and cities closing Do you agree or disagree 56
- Some people say that computers have made life easier and more convenient Other people say that computers have made life more complex and stressful What is your opinion Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 69
- Scientists believe that computers not humans will control cars in the near future What are the reasons for that Would this be a positive or a negative development 61
- The practice of illegally hunting wild animals continues to cause concern in many countries particularly developing countries What are the causes of such hunting What are the effects on the animals and on the wider human society in these countries and bey 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, second, so, well, whereas, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1357.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34251968504 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85258159821 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9410235573 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.9285714286 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1428571429 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78571428571 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.18575556144 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585628779891 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0364695690548 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100781824113 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0347949454598 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.56 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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