Some people say that E- books and modern technology will totally replace traditional newspaper and magazines to what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is believed by many that online books and technological advancements will change the conventional methods of reading
newspapers and magazines. I completely agree that e-books will replace the paper based reading due to environmental benefits, convinience and vairiety of material.
One obvious reason for switching from paper based to e-reading is to save the environment. Newspapers and magazines printing will require ample amount of paper which will lead to deforestation. As the pollution and global warming is increasing day by day, with the cutting of trees , the government of various countries have become alert and are focussing more on saving trees by initiating several movements for it. Ultimately, it will result less manufacturing of paper therby helping in preserving natural resources for future generations which are available in scarcity.
Another major reason of possibility of people inclinig towards online reading is that it is pocket friendly and more easy to carry. Nowadays, there are many applications which the people can download on their mobile phones and laptops. They find it extremely helpful and handy while travelling as it does not require to carry extra weight of books with them. Moreover, individuals have more options of books and newspapers online as they can have the reading material in various languages at one place only.
In conclusion, in my opinion online books and reading material will vanish the newspapers and novels as they help in saving the earth by less use of papers. Additionally,they provide readers the comfort while commuting and availability of abundance material without spending a lot of money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, while, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1413.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43461538462 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97342693607 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.584615384615 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.0339682078 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.75 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.08333333333 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153809320246 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0605667232972 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0568597965744 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100238037344 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0425367292566 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.66 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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