Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?
People learn a number of valuable things at various stages of their lives, right from their infancy period. While some people are of the opinion that a child’s experience during his initial stages of life is more influential, others opine that influence is profound during teenage years. This essays aims to discuss both viewpoints before giving a personal opinion.
On the one hand, the experiences gathered in the infancy period of a child are extremely crucial and has a number of impacts. As the child begins to develop an understanding of their surrounding, every tiny piece of information is absorbed and retained by them, like a sponge soaking up water which reflects in their character in the later stages of their lives. For instance, if a child is taught to fear darkness, they subconsciously avoid dark places even after they are fully grown adults.
On the other hand, the lessons attained as a teenager also has an impact which they can refer to as valuable lessons in the future. Social norms like friendship, discipline, respecting the adults and many others values are all learned and interpreted in their teenage years. They experience freedom and new sense of purpose which they eagerly experiment with and gradually experience the pros and cons of their choices, which adds further to the range of knowledge gained for the future. For example, they set off on adventures that were forbidden to them to experience the thrill and the dangers they face teach them how to protect themselves.
To conclude, although children gain much information during their youth which might influence them but the things learned before being exposed to world have an equal influence and it subconsciously reflects in their character as they grow up. Hence, I believe that experiences as both a toddler and as teenager is very crucial for the future of a child.
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Suggestion: opinion
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Suggestion:
...very crucial for the future of a child.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, so, while, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1558.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00964630225 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65903762185 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559485530547 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.6037849924 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.833333333 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9166666667 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.41666666667 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25835304906 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10045616469 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638425717255 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172294867807 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.080853239209 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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