Some people say history is one the most important school subjects. Other people think that, in today’s world, subjects like science and technology are more important than history. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many believe History is the one of the school cousres that should be considered very essential while others argue that in these days and age other branches such as Science and technology deserve more attention In my view every branch of science is important and essential and we should not choose one and leave others.
Many people consider History as the most needed subject and it is mostly due to the fact that humankind end to repeat its behavior over the time, in other words we people what previous generations did and almost get the same results therefore if we study history we could learn alot from what our ancestors did and what they achieve by that and what were its consequencies. If we figure out what they did wrong and what made them successful then it is possible to avoid their mistakes and copy their success acordingly.
as appossed to the view of people who think History is the number one subject to study in schools there is another view how prefer science and technology. If we only focus on the History then there will be no future and inovation because it is inovation resulted from science that enabled humans to prosper In other words the huge developement of countries and nations is mainly resulted from technology and to continue it we should study this brabch more and more.
In conclusion, eventhough there are to appossing belife about the importance of history in comparison with science and technology I think both of them are essential and should be considered important equaly.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...nd copy their success acordingly. as appossed to the view of people who thin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, then, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, in my view, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1269.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84351145038 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50473882204 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.530534351145 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 20.2975951904 212% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 87.0199530121 49.4020404114 176% => OK
Chars per sentence: 211.5 106.682146367 198% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.6666666667 20.7667163134 210% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.1666666667 7.06120827912 215% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25808421629 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.139052458568 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0846595194016 0.0667982634062 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168194863617 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0509400972544 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.2 13.0946893788 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.29 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.68 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 78.4519038076 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.78957915832 276% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.1190380762 190% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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