It is thought by some that history is a keen course amidst all courses, while other people believe that science and technology are of great importance in today's world. In this essay I will discuss both stance and explore my opinion.
One the one hand, history is an integral subject that enlightens one culture and ancient happenings. For example, if there was no history as a course of study, obatala, sango and ogun stories will all be a thing of the past. History brought the story to lame light, where we all joke and talk about it in class. Furthermore, history helps to keep records of past events. For instance, events like stopping of slavery in the past as well as, stopping of the killing of twins.
One the other hand, science and technology is a subject that can not be done away with. Everything around us today came into play as a result of the effortade by scientists. Science and technology has made things easier for us, our machines, electronics, personal computer and even mobile phones are as a result of the knowledge gotten from science and technology. It is also of vital importance and helps for our daily living.
In my opinion, despite all said, both courses of study are explicit depending on the area in which they are needed. For example, history is needed in the aspect of culture and for traditional benefits. While, science and technology is needed for easy work and rendering relevant help in our day to day life. For example, the use of washing machine, the use of calculator, to mention a few.
In conclusion,the subjects: history, science and technology are important school subject, it now depends on the aspect in which they are needed
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78082191781 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57820993089 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.554794520548 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0103609222 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.25 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288481921849 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868397514568 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0778518474407 0.0667982634062 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167660441027 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818900525045 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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