Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.What is your opinion about this?

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Some people say it is important to keep your home and your workplace tidy, with everything organised and in the correct place.

What is your opinion about this?

Clean surrounding is assurance of a healthy lifestyle. Many individuals claim that it is a matter of utmost significance to keep our houses and offices clean, while everything should be at its right place and order. As we extent this argument further in the essay, in my opinion, one should always maintain tidiness at both the places.

A person who keeps its belongings in order, is a well organised human being in general. This trait of people shows their ability to succeed in professional and personal life as they keep track of things and plan everything before handed. Apart from this, they are always punctual and well sorted. For instance, a recent study on the "corporate performance indicators" revealed that the young professional who organise their tasks are mostly likely to complete them with in given time frame.

Furthermore, untidy environment is a genuine health hazard for humans. A place that is not being cleaned periodically will give birth to a number of germs, which result in infecting human body with chronic diseases and illness. The people living in such condition is always vulnerable to these viruses that can even cause death to them or have a certain impact on their health for the rest of their life.

In the end, we should not only emphasised on the importance of being well organised, but also encourage people to keep themselves and their surroundings neat and clean for the prospect of a healthy and progressive living. This is the only way to bring harmony and peace in our lives as health is wealth

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 32, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'should' requires base form of the verb: 'emphasise'
Suggestion: emphasise
...e. In the end, we should not only emphasised on the importance of being well organis...
^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in general, in my opinion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1304.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97709923664 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77269783279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.603053435115 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2511312101 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.666666667 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130925969143 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446798660082 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0286369641039 0.0667982634062 43% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.075765099754 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0242718854907 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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