You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
describe the training course you want to do
explain what the company could do to help you
say how the course will be useful for your job
Dear Osman,
I hope to find you in good health. Last night, while surfing the internet I happen to come across an advertisement about online training course of product management for the young professionals. The course is offered by information technology department of the University of Toronto.
This course is really essential for beginners as it enhances the skills required for sprint planning, as well as provides an inside on how to manage and maintain a product roadmap. Since, the course is only available for the salaried person, I require a reference letter from the company as prove of my job and to get myself enrolled for this training program.
Studying this course will not develop the process understanding but also help me in learning task management, which ultimately benefit in the progress of our product development capabilities.
Please consider my request at your earliest convenience, so that I can book my seat as soon as possible.
Regards
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Osman, I hope to find you in good health. Last ...
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Line 13, column 94, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to task'
Suggestion: to task
...erstanding but also help me in learning task management, which ultimately benefit in...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, really, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 32.9175257732 52% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 837.0 937.175257732 89% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29746835443 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95831748888 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.708860759494 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 9.13402061856 33% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.3173601722 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.571428571 76.5299724578 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 16.8248392259 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 4.34317383033 151% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300281334135 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111107344502 0.0766984524023 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0619125700623 0.0603063233224 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138831547008 0.12726935374 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859372887188 0.0580467560999 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 8.37731958763 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 70.7449484536 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 7.45979381443 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 8.71597938144 158% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.