Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?
The issue is arising due to the increasing concerns on the urban environment. Someone suggests it necessary to plant more trees than to construct new buildings in order to improve the quality of the environment. I partly agree with this point.
To Begin with. Planting trees could be essential to the well-being of the city and residents who live there. The urban ecological system may benefit a lot from increasing green scape. It could provide the different types of animals with shelters and habitats. The clusters of trees could also contribute to reducing the hot island effect and improve the micro-climate in the dense area of the city. Moreover, human-being could have many health benefits from plant trees by getting access to more green space such as parks, gardens, and playgrounds. The study shows, people who live near the green resources in the city, may have a longer life expectancy than those not liver near the green. All these benefits can't be achieved through the buildings.
On the other hand, news buildings are also necessary to a normal development of the city. Although it undeniable that it could casue some air and water pollution to the urban environment when constructing the new buildings, a city can not operate properly without sufficient density of buildings. In the new district of my hometown, where the building density is rather low but the density of the trees is higher, people don't like to live and work there. The main reasons include that there are not enough commercial and service building, which make it very inconvenient to live there. Besides, too many trees without a responding amount of buildings could cause some safety concerns to residents.People, especially women and children do not dare to go the large parks just because of their fear of crime, resulting in a waste of land and investment.
In all, planting trees is important to the well-being of the city and people who's living there. However, sufficient density of buildings also plays an important role in keeping the city operating as it could bring the city with safety and convenience. It's really hard to which side overweigh the other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, however, if, may, moreover, really, so, well, such as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1800.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 360.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35587717469 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70883328719 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.544444444444 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6511557961 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.7368421053 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9473684211 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63157894737 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238240005203 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0637957732961 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681403159444 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153619181183 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040686727188 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.