Some people say it is more important to plant trees in towns and cities than to build housing. Do you agree or disagree?
People are contending that these days that plantation is highly important in towns and cities as compared to building new housing. I completely agree with the notion because trees lead to a healthy atmosphere which is need of an hour when seen in the light of global warming.
Firstly, planting trees are essential to provide safer environment for the upcoming generations. Today, cities and towns are crowded with people owing to the civilisation that's happening in these places, which is generating pollution in the air. Plantation will help in balancing the pollution by producing oxygen that is essential for everyone. Evidently, 1 fully grown tree produces 60 grams of oxygen in one day which can counter balance pollution generated by 15 cars everyday. Thus, planting trees is beneficial for a safer environment.
Secondly, greenery is helpful in uplifting the health of people because of it's soothing affect. As compared to infrastructures which just give spaces to live, plants create an atmosphere which is good for health. Trees gives an illustration of green cover which is very good for physical health of everyone. To illustrate, Punjab is less prone to cancer in comparison to Rajasthan owing to it's more forest cover. So, people choose plantation over building new houses owing to the benefits of trees.
Hence, people wants to live in an atmosphere which is healthy and that can only be provided by trees. Even though companies can build new houses with beautiful architecture, nothing can be replaced with nature, which is essential to live in.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1316.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16078431373 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78631245576 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.8441057766 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 7.06120827912 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181854535474 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0678592051721 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627694650933 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117420755981 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0678792442839 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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