Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes.Do you agree or disagree?
As is known to all,everybody has his or her own view on selecting clothes.The clothes somebody like very much may be very ugly in others' opinion.Some People say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. I agree with that because I think culture and character are two vital factors for a person to choose their dress.
Firstly culture is key factor on people selecting dress.Culture is related to people's religion closely. There are christian,Muslim and Hindu in the world. And their dressings are quite different.Christian likes to wear suits,shirts and skirts, while Muslim prefer a Arabian traditional gowns.And female Hindu would like to wear the Indian mass.Therefore, you can know a person's culture from their clothes easily.Because people from different culture, especially from different religion will choose different style of clothes.
Secondly, character is another important factor for a person to choose their clothes.For example, a person with bad temper would like some tight suits cause they want to keep stress and refreshing at all times. However, a person with gentle temper prefer some loose clothes.So they can relax themselves and keep calm at any time.
In conclusion,everyone's clothes are related to the combination of culture and character. So we can know his or her culture,religion and even where he or she comes from. In other way, we can also tell a lot what his or her character is.And we can even find a right way to talk to a stranger according to his or her dresses.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for example, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05405405405 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15003496701 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 147.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567567567568 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 93.6056088063 49.4020404114 189% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.9 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.9 20.7667163134 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.35068352302 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121279505046 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0978950660712 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203446807725 0.151304729494 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123749077324 0.056905535591 217% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.11 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.