Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person’s culture and character from their choice of clothes.
Do you agree or disagree?
Some psychologists say, an individual 's personality and nature can be judged by their way of wearing the clothes. On the other hand, rest of the people disagree, because they point out the clothes they wear, depend upon on the occasion. I also agree with the latter statement.
Firstly, in some countries theor are rules and regulations for the clothes, the masses have to wear it, for instance, in muslim nation, the woman's have to wear 'Burkha', which is not their favourable wearing, but they have to, because it is in their custom, so no one can analyze the character and culture from the wearing style. Secondly, in the multinational companies, all the employees have to wear the same kind of uniform, with similar colors, and also in schools , folks are dressed in same kind of uniform. So no one can comment on their identity and they way they behave in the society.
In addition to this, people generally choose the outfit in relation to the occassion, where he or she is going to attend. For exaple, in any traditional festival, human beings will dress according to specific festival and every carnival has its own particular dress. So, it would be impossible to judge someone from choice of clothes he or she would pick.
In conclusion, after careful consideration, I believe that people's choice of clothes will illustrate their character, only if they are free to wear anything they want, not enforced by laws, working areas and schools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'countries'' or 'country's'?
Suggestion: countries'; country's
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Line 3, column 468, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...with similar colors, and also in schools , folks are dressed in same kind of unifo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1207.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 248.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86693548387 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62820646723 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612903225806 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 375.3 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7820030598 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.7 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155869948116 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059328023661 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539229675102 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924350227023 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381530724591 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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