Some people say that it is possible to tell a lot about a person's culture and character from their choice of clothes. Do you agree or disagree ?
Being successful in such a long progress needs a lot of factors for us to carry out. Education is one of the most important one. This thing is based on the way how one's parents educated them when they were kids.
Everyone often wonder what is the right way to educate their children. A child should be taught good way when they could be conscious of everything in their life. parents must teach their kids the behaviour which they should have such as:politeness, respect, independent,...,instead of letting them do everything they want. it doesn't mean that parents should compel their children seriously. At first, creating one's personality during their childhood is more important than teaching them knowledge. it doesn't mean that parents should compel their children seriously. Their education will not take effect. Besides, social skills are also essential. parents need to give opportunity for their children to learn social skills on their own.For instance, letting them take part in many outdoor activities such as: drawing, competitions, picnics,...Through these, they will not only be more activities but also be good at many fields. those give children positive energy, useful knowledge and essential skills for life. they will easily find the thing which they are interested in and behave rightly to everyone around them.
The way how parents educate their children is vital. because when they grow up,they will know how they should behave to everyone. They will also easily find things which they are actually in pursuit of. they are not successful because of their talent but also their manner. In daily life, a boss who can both treat his or her staff well and be famous for their career. that is th real person who makes his mark. As we know, being able to be successful, they have to study, experience and work very hard by themselves. but if there hadn't been their parents' education, they wouldn't have been a person like them at the present. In conclusion, education gives first basic step for a person to grow as a good citizen. there are some special cases that a person can still be successful although he wasn't brought up well. those are very rare and magical .
Finally, education is critical but parents have to have the right one. A comfortable way of education will help children to absorb it well. The rating of one's success doesn't actually stick out how they educated in the past. ut it doesn't mean that they weren't brought up in the childhood. In brief, how a person grows up doesn't entirely rely on the parents' way of education. it is based on all the lessons which they learn from any education.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, finally, first, if, so, still, well, for instance, in brief, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2186.0 1615.20841683 135% => OK
No of words: 447.0 315.596192385 142% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8903803132 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.59808378696 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61361339301 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 176.041082164 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485458612975 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 645.3 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 31.0 16.0721442886 193% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.9315284089 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5161290323 106.682146367 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4193548387 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.64516129032 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 35.0 5.01903807615 697% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 8.67935871743 196% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0801604137777 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027161194912 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254634105521 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0489234279296 0.151304729494 32% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0266789490688 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 50.2224549098 148% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 11.3001002004 57% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 10.49 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.05 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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