Some people think that the internet has brought people closer together, while others think that people and communities become more isolated.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
these days, the 4.0 industry grows so well that technology becomes more and more popular.this is also the reason why there are many people said that the internet could replace the use of books as the main source of knowledge for education. In my opinion, this is not completely exactly. internet cannot do this.
Both of books and internet have their own advantages and disadvantages. Nowadays, people still take interest in books a lot. books are also a tool, transportation for us to explore many interesting and useful things. The advantages of studying from books are everything is written very carefully and clearly; reading books doesn’t do harm to our health as computers and phones do. The blue light from the screen of technological device badly affects our eyes, skin, health,…And many people find reading books relaxed. these are some of the reasons why someone prefer to reading up on to surfing the internet for their study. On the other hand, you will have to spend a lot of money on buying books. Actually, the cost for books isn’t too high, but using the internet is cheaper and more convenient. someone maybe plough through when they study by books, but it is more amazing and motivated for them to study from the internet.
there is something that the internet cannot replace the use of books.At the present, you can easily find the old books from some old bookstores. Especially, the readers may explore much meaningful information or knowledge from ones. many things you find in these books may not exist in the internet. when you buy old books or lend someone’s books, you can see many important and helpful notes from the last owner of them. this is what the internet is not be able to do. Besides, studying by the internet attracts people to play games or use social media app such as Facebook, Instagram and so on. While you can easily focusing on studying by books.To many people, collecting and having a bookshelf which is full of books is such pride. books have many unique advantages that the internet never can copy.
so from now then on, you cannot get across your point that books will be replaced by the internet.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, may, so, still, then, well, while, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1799.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82305630027 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55957907902 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.517426273458 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.2197351418 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.6666666667 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7619047619 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.04761904762 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134383003181 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476483024619 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0368680835364 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.095116349696 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.039491693293 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.38 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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