Fashion has become a crucial part of people’s lives. Nowadays, everyone wants to look better for various reasons and aware that better clothing improves their personality a lot. However, should be judge people merely from their appearance? I agree to some extent with the given view, however, it’s not feasible to know a lot about people's culture and character by merely looking at their clothes.
Firstly, in this world of globalization, jeans and T-shirts are becoming popular day by day. In fact, people get used to them and prefer to wear them more than their traditional clothing. Hence, it’s not possible to obtain any details about their culture. However, when they occasionally come out wearing their traditional outfits, not a lot of things but at least something can be learned about your culture and ethnicity. Even if, we can tell about people’s religion and race etc by checking a person’s outfit, it may also be misleading sometimes and doesn’t really provide any other details about the culture, that person belongs to.
Next, if we come to a person’s character and personality, then it undoubtedly provides more details. For instance, if a person’s cloths are dirty and grubby, then it can be said that either the person is extremely poor or has some outdoor work and vice versa. However, it may also present incorrect data and the scenario may be completely upside down.
In essence, clothing doesn’t provide any significant details about a person’s culture and character. This may also be misleading which could create confusion and chaos. On one hand, a person wearing dirty clothes may not be a poor person. One the other hand, a man wearing the most beautiful clothing may not be a gentleman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, look, may, really, so, then, at least, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1488.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18466898955 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87467637835 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578397212544 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.303980323 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321231515828 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10637481483 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891682533138 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19828541376 0.151304729494 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0921897345928 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.0 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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