In this era of technological advancements, people are now embracing different technologies more than ever. Nowadays, technology is being used to work from home as well as for study purposes. Even though it is a convenience, it also has harmful effects on people’s lives.
Firstly, many organizations around the world provide the facility to their officials to work from home. The intention behind providing such a facility is to encourage workers to work more efficiently and productively from home. However, it may not always be the case as many of them just log into their computers and watch television. Apart from that, working from home makes workers lazy and physical inactivity leads to health conditions such as obesity and heart diseases.
Next, even though computers and online classes can be used to study from home, it lacks actual human interaction. For instance, a student can ask a question directly to a teacher in a classroom but while taking a class online he may have to wait at the end of the lesson or type a question that may be ignored. Hence, technology can be used for learning purposes but it cannot be an alternative to the classrooms.
Lastly, technology can still be used in an effective way when natural calamities take place and people are trapped in their houses. Computers and other gadgets may come handy in these situations and can be used to finish a lesson or work from home.
In essence, different technologies have become a part of people’s lives and their significance cannot be ruled out. However, while attending classes or working; human interaction is one of the most crucial factors, which cannot be avoided either. In my opinion, technology should be used to make people more efficient rather than to be used as a luxury.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in an effective way" with adverb for "effective"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
... Lastly, technology can still be used in an effective way when natural calamities take place and ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, lastly, may, so, still, well, while, apart from, as for, for instance, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98662207358 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86523517357 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555183946488 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.1086618237 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1333333333 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199368098163 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0775255267235 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541419019603 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121004734124 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562687171551 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.43 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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