Dear Sam,
Hope, you are doing well.
I received your letter seeking advice regarding the best option between college and a job. As you know, I have experience of going to college; I think it’s just a waste of time. I’d recommend you to look for a job instead, for better and productive use of your time.
As a matter of fact, I have seen you more interested in practical knowledge than bookish and attending a college will only get you more bookish knowledge which you might not enjoy at all. I am not saying that bookish knowledge isn’t necessary but practical knowledge is way better than this. Moreover, looking at the financial condition of your family, you must get a job to support them instead of spending your little savings on the expensive graduation course which you cannot afford at this time.
As you have always been interested in computer programming and ethical hacking, I am sure that you will get a wonderful job in this field with excellent pay. As a matter of fact, I can even arrange a few interviews for you, if you are interested.
Let me know. I will be looking forward to your reply.
Best regards,
Sumit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, moreover, regarding, well, i think, you know, as a matter of fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 963.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74384236453 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57692446299 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591133004926 0.622605031667 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.83505154639 272% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.6373555565 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.25 76.5299724578 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9166666667 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305888414035 0.216113520407 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104024732781 0.0766984524023 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0791773029194 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158932557152 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0995462297068 0.0580467560999 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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