You have lost an item of value on train.Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter•Describe the item•Explain where and when you left it•Say what action you would like the company to take

Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I have lost my Samsung Galaxy C7 Pro while traveling from New Delhi to Bareilly in the train no 3456. This is a white-colored mobile with IMEI number 5467 and needed to be found urgently as it contains some of my most crucial personal and professional data.

I had booked myself a seat (Ticket number 879) in the sleeper coach so that I could sleep through the long and tiresome journey and put my mobile phone on the table nearby. However, as I woke up just in the nick of time while the train was leaving Bareilly station, I forgot to pick it up before getting off the train.

Hence, I request you to send someone to the mentioned above coach and seat number to look for it on priority as if it’s found by someone with crucial intentions, my reputation and business may be at stake. Once it is found please hold it in your office as I will get there to collect it personally.

Yours sincerely,
Sumit Singh

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
Essays by the user:

Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, may, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 808.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 183.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.41530054645 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39861456822 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661202185792 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 249.3 290.88556701 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.2700236132 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.428571429 76.5299724578 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 16.8248392259 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 4.34317383033 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.105762025322 0.216113520407 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446452666637 0.0766984524023 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488428782444 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0644905026707 0.12726935374 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0358479877494 0.0580467560999 62% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 8.37731958763 149% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.01 70.7449484536 88% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 7.45979381443 149% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 8.71597938144 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 8.62886597938 151% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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