Perhaps one of most common myths we believe in is our happiness is directly proportionate to the wealth we possess. It's true, much of our lives circulates around money but this does not mean we cannot be happier without cash. The popular say that can describe the scenario is'' Money can buy many things but not all''. In this essay we will evaluate different scenarios where being rich makes our life comfortable and other aspects which we can cherish.
Often we see people enjoying luxurious lifestyle is an example of miracles created by money. Financial assurance gives us great confidence while embarking our journey. Therefore, it's not surprise when people conclude that most of their problems get solved by possessing lot's of money. On the other hand, being rich means getting public attention. Often, especially media, we see elite persons getting maximum coverage whenever they attend a public function. Similarly, words of wealthy person is command to the ordinary people. Most importantly, valuable assets helps us to offer protection to our loved ones. For example, when my friend had to take chemotherapy or an expensive surgery it's my money which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world to the kids.
All that being said, most important thing that makes us happier without the need of money is to be with our loved one's. Infact, irrespective of our financial status, people who love us can bring all the happiness in the world. For instance, parents love to their children is not something we can quantify in terms of bank balance. There are diseases which cannot be cured even after spending lot of money. Whereas, as recommended by doctors, an evening with beloved family member can boost our energy and save us from all health disorders. Sometimes, people search their well being in doing some thing they like to perceive an hobby. Reading a book, playing music and games are some fun activities which brings smiles in our faces without intervention of money.
In a nutshell, though it seems that our life experience is much related to money we save for ourselves, but real enjoyment is to lead a life with joy. Further, happiness is state of mind but and subject to the interpretation of person living it. Hence, in my opinion, secret to happy life lies is being content and limiting our earnings only to our limitations.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...while embarking our journey. Therefore, its not surprise when people conclude that ...
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Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... loved ones. For example, when my friend had to take chemotherapy or an expensive...
^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake chemotherapy or an expensive surgery its my money which rescued him. Apart,we...
^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e chemotherapy or an expensive surgery its my money which rescued him. Apart,we ca...
^^^
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...y its my money which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world ...
^^^
Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'afford the best'.
Suggestion: afford the best
...y money which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world to the kids. ...
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Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
... which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world to the kids. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 592, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...people search their well being in doing some thing they like to perceive an hobby. Reading...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... doing some thing they like to perceive an hobby. Reading a book, playing music an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54975057748 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583959899749 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6897080698 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5217391304 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272059895168 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751074891017 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055047082998 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168780346814 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339799655557 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 180, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...while embarking our journey. Therefore, its not surprise when people conclude that ...
^^^
Line 3, column 638, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... loved ones. For example, when my friend had to take chemotherapy or an expensive...
^^
Line 3, column 688, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ake chemotherapy or an expensive surgery its my money which rescued him. Apart,we...
^^
Line 3, column 690, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e chemotherapy or an expensive surgery its my money which rescued him. Apart,we ca...
^^^
Line 3, column 727, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , we
...y its my money which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world ...
^^^
Line 3, column 735, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'afford the best'.
Suggestion: afford the best
...y money which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world to the kids. ...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 742, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to best', 'to well'
Suggestion: to best; to well
... which rescued him. Apart,we can afford best education in the world to the kids. ...
^^^^
Line 5, column 592, Rule ID: ANY_BODY[2]
Message: Did you mean 'something'?
Suggestion: something
...people search their well being in doing some thing they like to perceive an hobby. Reading...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 625, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... doing some thing they like to perceive an hobby. Reading a book, playing music an...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, similarly, so, therefore, well, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 49.0 24.0651302605 204% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1967.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9298245614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54975057748 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583959899749 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 605.7 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.6897080698 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 85.5217391304 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.347826087 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.34782608696 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272059895168 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0751074891017 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.055047082998 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168780346814 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0339799655557 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.