some people say that the main way to be happy in life is to have a lot of money . how might having a lot of money make people happy?what other things in life can make people happy?
In this contemporary settings,people are becoming money oriented and realistic.The basic purpose of life is high earnings and living a luxurious life.This is the way through which they find their joyous and pleasure.While other opine that happiness resides in little pleasurable things of life.
On the one hand,the basic standard of life is acquiring things through money.Milennials purchase utilities and commodities with the help of money which make them blissful.It is scientifically proved that 90% of the generation stay happy due to possessive things generated through money.For instance, people in droves prefer to buy electronic gadgets,unique clothing and valuable items with affordabitily of money.Moreover,these worth able things make them deliberately happy.Lastly,our needs and choices are dependant on buying and shopping. Generally people aspire of huge money to fulfill their dreams such as ostentatious house,expensive smartphones , enormous cars and so on.
Additionally,if a children demand a significant toys of their choice when they are roaming in supermalls with after having it in exchange of money it will precisely give them a warm feeling of happiness.As well as we can make any sad person feel back to smile by offering valuable things. lastly,providing presents and gifts to our dear one will make our healthy relationship.
secondly, there are various other means of happiness too. Firstly, people believe happiness in love. People are habitual of feeling love in their each generation.It is proved that million of people have sacrificed their everything for the sake of love. Besides this,little things of non material value,marriage,gifts and etc makes people extremely happy.
To be concluded,apart from the various benefits of acquiring money, this only a paper note cannot make anyone sufficiently happy and prosperous in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67971530249 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.50614369493 2.80592935109 125% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629893238434 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.752599976 49.4020404114 291% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 159.6 106.682146367 150% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.1 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.400995442318 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15414428664 0.084324248473 183% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0673575786922 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.213640607622 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0651573178418 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 50.2224549098 52% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 11.3001002004 147% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.96 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 32.0 9.78957915832 327% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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