Some people say modern innovations bring lot of problem than benefits? Do you agree or disagree?
The world has taken a huge jump in the field of technology and the civilization has been seeing wonderful discoveries, from smartphones to landing on space. Although with some inventions, sometimes there exists few repercussions; I still believe that technological revolution of contemporary world is a boon for humanity.
At the outset, there are many advantages that science has given to humankind. The most primary one is, undoubtedly, it has increased the comfort and convenience in life. For instance, the invention of air-crafts has made travel easy to any part of the world. Similarly, interacting with any person is no more a challenge due to voice and video calling invention. Admittedly, people in recent times have become citizens of global world, reaping the benefits of studying and working at places of their choice. Along with this, the trade and business has prospered making people aware of different countries, opening a bigger global market for the people. During old days, people faced the challenge of distance and time, so even country-wide trades were not flourishing. Nonetheless, no such limitations exists, which definitely compels to highlight the beneficial world owing to technical advancement.
Moreover, the space science has blessed the field of weather forecasting. During medieval era, people did not know about climatic changes in advance; making people lose their lives in case of sudden calamities. However, now days the weather is forecasted well in-advance and sea-sailors or fisher-mans' know about calamities, so that they do not risk their life. Hence, benefits of such invention can never be ignored.
On the other hand, there are few drawback of innovations, such as youth misusing the telecommunication for unproductive reasons. In other words, many people seem occupying themselves on smartphones, and wasting their energy playing games and communicating with virtual friends. Similarly, the invention of air-travel has led to air traffic and space pollution, which has hazardous ramifications.
In conclusion, despite few negatives the blessings of modern innovations cannot be ignored. Undeniably, the world has become a better place to live with comfort because of these advancement. Thus, I firmly believe that creative ideas should be encouraged, and it is more a blessing than a curse for overall civilization.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 13, column 30, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'few drawbacks'.
Suggestion: few drawbacks
...ored. On the other hand, there are few drawback of innovations, such as youth misusing ...
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Line 17, column 173, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this advancement' or 'these advancements'?
Suggestion: this advancement; these advancements
...r place to live with comfort because of these advancement. Thus, I firmly believe that creative i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, moreover, nonetheless, similarly, so, still, thus, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2017.0 1615.20841683 125% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52602739726 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09691582 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 176.041082164 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613698630137 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 624.6 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1610676204 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.85 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.25 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.4 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0944189711033 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0242023222672 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0280379870643 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0470391040398 0.151304729494 31% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220058783414 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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