Some people say that money can make life easier and more comfortable. But others say that having a great amount of wealth can bring some problems.
What do you think are the advantages and disadvantages of a having a lot of money?
In today's era of modernization, money plays a major role. It is believed by some that being rich can help a person to live life on his or her terms. Conversely, others think that having a lot of money can bring trouble. This essay will discuss the merits and demerits of being more wealthy.
Being rich can have many positives. Firstly, a wealthy person can buy all the necessities of life like education, house and food without giving it a second thought. They can get the best of resources necessary to be sustain in this world. Secondly, they can help the society by donating money, so it can develop. For example, Mukesh Ambani, one of the richest man in the world, donates half of his income to the gvernment hospitals for better treatment of patients. Lastly, rich people can stay a luxurious life and does not have to go through the struggles like common man i.e. travelling in public transport, working on a fixed salary etc.
If a person has money, he can fulfill all his or her wishes, help the society and live life conveniently.
However, being a tycoon is not an easy task and their are some drawbacks associated with that. Wealthy people have to pay more tax on their income. For example, In India, people having salary and estates of more than 50 lakh rupees have to pay 10% more tax than others. Furthermore, they have to hire accountants and managers to look after their property and accounts. Additionally, these big shots often tend to have obsession for money and this can change their perception of life. Being wealthy can cause problems in a person's life.
In conclusion, being a big shot can be beneficial for making life easy, but one should not overlook the demerits associated with it.
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: there
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Suggestion: persons'; person's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6821192053 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52023954926 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 438.3 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.7452020888 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.72222222222 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.31345513931 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110924868278 0.084324248473 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0815897921572 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179238634548 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0748152813018 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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