Some people say now there is less communication between family members than in the past. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A section of society considers that these days family members communicated among themselves have reduced compared to the earlier days. In my opinion, I completely agree with the statement. The reason behind this is all are busy in the race to have a successful life.
Firstly, We are in the age of competition and everyone is part of that to maintain the success, work-life have become so stressful these days which leaves insufficient time to interact with the loved ones. As on before, people life was simple with less expectation, but with the increase in needs, to achieve them has also become a challenge. For instance, research says that on an average 89% of people spends 12 to 13 hours at the workplace which is excluding travelling and by the time they reach home it is exhausting for them to carry out even any small talks. As a result, the communication gap is increased between members of the family.
Secondly, parents and children are not in favour of each other’s thought and out of respect ignorance is the best policy to avoid any arguments by opposing their opinions. If it often observed that many avoid conversations just because the opposite person will not understand the view of others and the better option is not to talk rather than insulting themselves. For example, in my country, if we object to any discussion made by parents it is also considered to be disrespecting them and to alleviate the consequence it better expect it without asking further questions which is why the interactions are not there.
To conclude, due to stressful work life and to manage the standard of living people are left with limited time to communicate. Moreover, the difference is views also lead to the same these days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 43, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'days'' or 'day's'?
Suggestion: days'; day's
...section of society considers that these days family members communicated among thems...
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Line 3, column 525, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'betters', 'wells'?
Suggestion: betters; wells
...hem and to alleviate the consequence it better expect it without asking further questi...
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Line 3, column 620, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... is why the interactions are not there. To conclude, due to stressful work life ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7744516358 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59595959596 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.9 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.4047842569 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.75 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106061366101 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0409135962202 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486758200191 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0584779463203 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0380861875943 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.32 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.