It is widely argued that watching movies on our laptops or mobile phones is comfortable and fun , whereas another group of people opine that watching movies in theater gives an amazing experience. Let us discuss both these views before drawing a concrete opinion.
On thebone hand, internet has made our lives so much easier that we can downloas the movies released recently and watch it on our mobile. This can reduce the expenses that we spend for a movie ticket. Yet another reason is that people can pause the film whenever they want and can continue when they are free. In my opinion , watching a movie on our phone gives us the liberty to wear the outfits we are comfortable with and enjoy snacks we love to eat instead of spending more on the items available at the mall. In a recent survey conducted by forum magazine, 75% of the people are agitated by the pricing of the food products available at the theater.
On the other hand, piracy should not be encouraged among people. As the movie team would have spent millions to make a movie , it is advisable to go to theatre to watch the movie. It creates a fascinating experience, a mobile phone fails to give. When we are watching a movie with a group of people , it can he exhilarating to dance to the songs in the movie and to cheer our favourite actor in obliterating the villain. From my experience, I was never a person who would spend money for a movie in a theater, but when my friend took me out for the Avengers movie , I had an awesome moment where I even got goosebumps.
In conclusion, opinion might vary from a person to person, but in my opinion watching movie in a theater is enthralling and gives us a pleasant experience.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, so, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1387.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.50324675325 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53526807968 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.538961038961 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6787986011 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.692307692 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6923076923 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15464725613 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0643896774257 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327113689949 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987356475106 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344744949812 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.12 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.9 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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