Some people say that nowadays there is less communication between family members. Do you agree or disagree? Give relevant examples from your experience.
It is an undeniable fact that close-knit members play an incredible role by providing mental support in any condition. However, it is said by few people that there is a communication gap observed between relatives these days. I completely agree with this observation and reasons behind this development are discussed in my discourse ahead.
To begin with, it seems clear that nowadays most people are too much busy in their professional work. This is because, in the era of
cut-throat competition, it is of paramount important to excel and stay ahead at workplace. Resultantly, first priority is given to job responsibilities
which has increased mental and physical stress. This makes it unable for people to spend qualitative time with near and dear ones once they return home which is the prime reason behind noticeable gap in communication between family members. Take for instance, as per survey conducted by the university of California in 2018 revealed that more than 40% employees in Canada felt mental stress due to over burden at office which made impossible for them to spend time with family which increased distance between them and their loved ones.
Additionally, another significant point that needs to be considered is the adaptation of western culture. This means to say that presently foreign culture is followed across the globe and owing to that more people believe in nuclear family which has made them oblivious to the significance of joint family. Furthermore, the teenagers make themselves busy to live materialistic lifestyle even during weekends instead of spending time with their close family members. A good case in point can be a report published in the Toronto Times in 2019 which showed that most youngsters in Ontario preferred to spend more time with their bosom friends even during holidays and day-offs which has resulted in less communication between family members.
To conclude, based on the above discussion, while there are numerous ways to be in touch with close members, I believe people's preference to career and blind follow of other western cultures have resulted in communication gap between family member
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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...riority is given to job responsibilities which has increased mental and physical ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, while, for instance, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1819.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24207492795 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84096948971 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 203.0 176.041082164 115% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585014409222 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 573.3 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.8918583242 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.923076923 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.46153846154 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149617127944 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.053331483012 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0425423642669 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0744280342281 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0384954905384 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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