Nowadays, every individual aspiring for flamboyant career life is willing to be bilingual. In this case many argue that
learining an overseas language is must either to visit or work in that country, while others say there are several other reasons to learn an additional language. In my opinion, I am aligned with the latter View.
On the one hand, though tourism and business cater for major stake amongst non-indigenous language learners. Businessman, for instance believe, if they trade in new country with their indigenous language, they stand a better chance
to bag respective order. This is to say, success of a certain business may depent on how efficiently one leads the haggle there. Furthermore, many people when visit to a non-native country, has to face price escalation of whatever they buy. When foreigners come to Goa, local people there increase their tariffs substantially. However at the same time if the local
trader finds his customer speaking Hindi the rates are slashed down to normal. This way it happens globally.
On the other hand, people such as artist, scientiest , doctor and many other professional's find foreign language of their use. In other words, for such people to learn literature useful for their profession may only be available in some other non
native language. To gain this written knowledge it is mandatory for them to learn such language winimum profeciancy. It was unveiled recently, the first definition about "zero" was found in Indian author's book. This was valuable information was explored by an American Scientist. Another reason, people learn new language is that they want to understand ethic culture there. To have deep learning about new land it always suggested by experts to learn native language.
In conclusion, although learning new language is emphasized by particular people, there are several other domains that need fluent native speaker
- A lot of places in the world rely on tourism as a main source of income. Unfortunately, tourism can also be a source of problems if it is not managed correctly.Describe the advantages and disadvantages of tourism in the modern world. Do you think that ben 89
- shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food. Do you agree or disagree 95
- Question: An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies to shopping online? 78
- Your child is going on a three day school trip to another country. The head teacher wants to find parents to go with the group and you would like to go.Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter:•Say why you would like to go on the trip•Sugges 73
- Employers sometimes ask people applying for jobs for personal information, such as their hobbies and interests, and whether they are married or single. Some people say that this information may be relevant and useful, others disagree. Discuss both the vie 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
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Line 8, column 53, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... hand, people such as artist, scientiest , doctor and many other professionals fin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.30392156863 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76844604794 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624183006536 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2950869035 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.1666666667 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.88888888889 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286779362351 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752499736957 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0679268630757 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106263625662 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797414086051 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.16 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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