some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign languages is in order to travel to work in a foreign country. others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language.discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Some people think that the main motive to learn a foreign language is to do travel and get work opportunities in foreign countries. By contrast, others have conflicting views. Here, I would like to account both the view points with my own perception.
There are manifold points to support the former view. First and foremost, with the knowledge of foreign language people can not only communicate with foreigners but also get two square meal while staying in other nations. Millions of students who do study in foreign countries have to do work for their basic needs such as food, shelter, and clothes and they do work in big hotels and motels only with the knowledge of foreign language. Beside this, people can communicate with foreigners and mix in their environment if they have good skills of foreign language. Therefor, learning foreign language is the need of an hour for those who migrate in foreign countries.
Numerous points can be mentioned in the latter view. Initially, people can accumulate knowledge about other nations if they learn foreign language. To be specific, on social networking sites people can make friends of different countries and they share their ideas,feeling,and thoughts with each other.Apart from it, a person knowledge of distinct languages can attract foreigners during their visit in native country. Taking a real life example, my cousin have a knowledge of French language,last year he visited Jaipur over their and he was curious about the Jaipur fort and my cousin told him about the history of that fort then foreigner felt amazed and he gave one hundred doller and served a cup of coffee with him. Thus, people can not only allure foreigners but also get working opportunity in their native country.
To recapitulate, both the points have their own significance, learning foreign language is fruitful for everyone no matter they live in other countries or their native country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, then, thus, while, apart from, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1621.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12974683544 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69394888579 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.534810126582 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.7732182013 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.785714286 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338752422041 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.143421163671 0.084324248473 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877862136177 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243579399627 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531865429294 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.77 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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