Some people say a person’s success in adult life is the result of the way they brought up as a child by their parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowdays success is one of the salient aspect of life. there are plethora of people who believes that success comes from their childhood while other oppose this view. In my notion I have seen both ways of coins.
To embark on, there are multifarious personality whose parents dint give attention to them, still they are famous and well established. To begin with, it's true child are the tender bud of our country, they grasp whatever has been taught since childhood. parents are the first teacher of child who gives direction of life, however it is not possible that every parent can afford expensive studies and classes. one of the best example is our Prime minister "Narendra Modi". he has a tea stall in the childhood and his maximum time has devoted to buy tea. His parents could not able to give maximum time even though he has proven himself as a successfull person.
On the flip side of life, there are plethora of people whose parents gave proper attention and expensive studies, tutions etc, still they are not successfull in their life. Their aim has changed as per the time and they environment plays a key role here. parent gives extra pressure to them to achieve success in their life, hence in depression few people attempt suicide.
Laconically, it can be inferred that anyone can be successfull in theircertainl life basic values are important which every parent teaches to their child. To conclude, after guaging both I certainly feel that it is important to inculcate a child but not always necessary that it will lead to a successfull person in the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, however, if, so, still, well, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1320.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85294117647 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55099376796 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.577205882353 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3535396622 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2857142857 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.92857142857 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208195899892 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070959355954 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347705298273 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12937457982 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0323345004544 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.66 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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