Some people say that protecting the environment is the government’s responsibility. Others believe that every individual should be responsible for it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Environment and Human being are two sides of a coin, both link to each other. Some People, however, presume that it is the sole responsibility of the government to protect our mother nature, whereas others understand that, it is their responsibility to fortify. In my opinion, the effort should be combined from both public and government to get the best result out of it.
While the government is concerned, people elect a government to take care of the community, region and environment. Government, in other words, not only bears the sole responsibility of changes to our peripheral but also should be accounted for damage made into it. The mass tends to get over depended on current ministry. Recently when holly river Ganga, for example, filled with rubbish people rely on the administration to clean it, henceforth current prime minister Mr Modi took a considerable step to clean river. Our authority, furthermore, should use social media to spread awareness among people; nowadays, 70% of people use social media as a medium of interaction for public disputes, which will be helpful to fasten open communication.
Individuals, traditionally, got escaped from serious hazards by blaming on others. However, protecting the environment should be the first chapter in their syllabus of life. They miscomprehend that the ending of the climate will also bring the end of humanity. There are several steps that a person can take care: firstly, everyone should know how to rescue our nature; the pitfall surrounding condition should be discussed with family and friends, following that, all prevention technique must be transfer to children by their parents, and the same sequence must continue to the next generation. These approaches will achieve the intent, as people tend to believe their nearest and dearest one most.
To conclude, protecting our environment must be a joint endeavour. Nevertheless, the first initial step must be taken by govt to spread awareness, and then should collab with people to save our environment, generations, and children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, nevertheless, so, then, whereas, while, for example, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 329.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27963525836 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25891501996 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96511998274 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607902735562 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.562126638 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.8 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9333333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293338435768 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0933464751796 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0614915182585 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179216489907 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709146960029 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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