Some people say that schools do not do enough to teach young people about health.
Do you agree or disagree?
It is argued that educational institutions provide less or no contribution towards educating their pupils regarding health-related topics. People seem to have varying views on this topic based on their age, location, and cultural background. As for me, from what I have experienced throughout my life, I partially concur with the point of view, as schools do not really put in an effort to spread awareness regarding certain areas compromising our health, due to narrow-minded societal thinking. I shall elaborate on these views and discuss a few other aspects on this topic in the forthcoming paragraphs.
My views on this topic are strengthened by a few personal experiences in my life. For instance, in a conservative country like India, sex education is considered a subject that is not to be discussed, in any circumstance. It is deemed to be a matter that should be ignored and never brought up especially in front of the kids. Moreover, basic procedures such as CPR (Cardiopulmonary resuscitation), which is necessary to revive a person after they have a stroke, are never taught by the administration bodies. Although sports are encouraged in many schools, the importance of physical activities is not usually talked about.
In deep contrast to my views (expressed above), some people believe that schools do provide enough education that is required to the children. Many schools promote healthy eating by making students bring homemade food and preventing unhealthy food to be sold in their canteens. Even though the educational institutions may educate their pupils on a few health-related topics, critical health issues involving sexual welfare are mostly avoided and are left to the parents on their education.
Based on the elaborate discussion in the paragraph above, we can conclude that, while providing education on topics implying to consume nutritious food and exercising, schools should also make a point to teach the youngsters about intimate matters as well.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, really, regarding, so, then, well, while, as for, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1674.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31428571429 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10149144464 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0223193014 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.769230769 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2307692308 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.76923076923 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149346638216 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0478977007193 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721646719785 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0868856501068 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0580339621627 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.84 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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