Some people think that in order for a hobby to be enjoyable, it needs to be difficult in some way.
Do you agree or disagree?
Several people are bound to have differing views on this topic. A few opine that strenuous pastime activities are more pleasurable. I vehemently disagree with this point of view, as people usually want to relax in their leisure time and the level of strain does not really matter. I shall elaborate on these views and discuss a few other aspects of this topic in the forthcoming paragraphs.
My views are strengthened by a few experiences in my personal life. For instance, after a long and tiring day at work, I usually find myself watching movies, listening to music, or reading my favorite books. Although these tasks require no effort whatsoever, it still provides me with utmost joy and relaxation. Moreover, there are a lot of other hobbies that people prefer to do in their free time such as playing board games, cooking, gardening, dancing and so on. People with different lifestyles prefer doing a plethora of things based on the time they get when they are free.
In deep contrast to my views (expressed above), some people are of the opinion that the more difficult a pursuit is, the more fulfillment it gives. They believe that doing hassle-free hobbies is boring and gives them no thrill. Activities like skydiving, climbing hills, feeding sharks, and so on, get their adrenaline pumping. Even though they are on the heavy side of the scale, it does not guarantee that only those who perform them are happy. People with a distinct perspective and outlook towards life may choose to just lie around on their couch and still be elated.
Based on the elaborate discussion in the paragraphs above, we can conclude that the key to happiness does not depend on the things we pursue in our spare time, but the felicity we get out of it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, moreover, really, so, still, then, for instance, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.82450331126 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54323821365 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599337748344 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0859467876 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1333333333 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123679081392 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357372940666 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389221759629 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625828236712 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0487152235728 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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