Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Inventions of Television bring drastic change in mankind’s lives and nowadays Television is being used ubiquitously for different purposes, hence, It is widely debated for context of being used it. Many people opine that conspicuous use for it is as entertainment only, while other considers it for educational purpose as well. In my opinion, I do not accept any of the side entirely as it is unfair to follow any one of them exclusively.
There is myriad of an argument for both stance. People watch variety of programs offered by television channels and entertain themselves which will beneficial to them for relaxation and leisure.In addition, they can choose them from different types of categories such as Music, Comedy, Action, News, etc. Taking some leisure time from routine is beneficial to improve their work productivity and give positive impact on their performanc. For Instance, as per BBC Business article Daily entertainment programs from television reduce work stress and refresh mind also. Therefore, televisions should be used as a pleasure.
People watch television to energize themselves by watching programs as per their interests; consequently it will give positive impact to refrain tiredness of their mind. Howerver, Television is being used as a source of knowledge also and it increases individua’ls knowledge. For example, many channels broadcast Educational programmes which can helps students to learn. Furthermore, channels like history and discovery educate people about many kinds of topics. It has been proven that learning from book is harder compare to series of videos over television.
In view of the argument outlined above, One can conclude that Use of television is vary upon individual’s need. Thus, it is prejudice to distinguite it for only one use.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, furthermore, hence, if, so, therefore, thus, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4219858156 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09524908091 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.602836879433 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.213979337 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310267263533 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104837705502 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762659298371 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196855932096 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0639107466146 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.51 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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