Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress, because what matters is the quality of their work. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There are so many areas which would consider while Company creates their work ethics policy and one of the widely debated topic over the notion of Employees dress code. Some claims that it should be considerable and other section of society opine that organisations should focus on outcome of their workers tasks rather than dress codes. In my view, management should emphasize more on quality of work instead of making rules and regulations related to physical appearance of their workforce.
Employers should not care much about dress whether it is formal or informal because if employees feel free then they can give creativity towards their work and improve their work quality. Furthermore, sometimes employees feel ennoying to obeying rules for what to wear, thus they feels their company like a prison and that will give a negetive impact on their work quality. Consequently, organisation looses to inhance their employee’s creativity. For instance, we can consider big tech companies like Google, Amazon; they never applying any kind of dress code regulation and It is proven that if emplyees feel happy on their work place then their creativity level could reach to new levels everyday.
On the other hand, having same dress code for all employees can make a positive impact as equality between all workers. Moreover, while any client visits or public sector companies which are having formal dresses or dress code that will present good appearance of company. Furthermore, it will make a disciplined image on their customer and clients. For example, Police, army or hospital employees having dress code which shows discipline and it is beneficial to public for identify them or recongnise and they can take help quickly.
In conclusion, I believe that to achieve good quality work employees should give more focus on outcomes of their employees work rather than considering their physical appearnce or setting some rules for dressing.
- You recently organised an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel. In their feedback, participants at the meeting said that they liked the hotel, but they were unhappy about the food that was served for lunch.-Say what the part 89
- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job.- say why he/she would not enjoy going to college- explain why getting a job is good idea for him/her- 41
- Some people think that employers should not care about the way their employees dress because what matters is the quality of their work To what extent do you agree or disagree 84
- Some people say that television is useful for education, while others say it is useful only for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 280, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'feel'
Suggestion: feel
...eying rules for what to wear, thus they feels their company like a prison and that wi...
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Line 2, column 696, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ativity level could reach to new levels everyday. On the other hand, having same dres...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, thus, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 313.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24920127796 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61308261587 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555910543131 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.9248289613 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.916666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0833333333 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.320224287974 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.128395573887 0.084324248473 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0773260144929 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206122870202 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0756917793338 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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