Being familiar with other nation, human beings tend to travel to other countries. To be aware of others believe, lifestyle and costumes people throughout the world start a long journey to various part of the sphere. It is thought by others, other than traveling in general, people could readily get access to adequate information and knowledge regarding other countries by surfing on the internet and TV documentaries. In this essay I am going to elaborate details of both points of views.
In is said by mentors, traveling contribute to openness of people minds and it is called as a way of understanding of other people believe and habits. Plus, traveling abroad result in being aware of others advancement in term of either culture or technology and this interaction could somehow lead to injection of fair points into our communities. Furthermore, having direct connection is an issue is an issue that could not be neglected since that is more effective than indirect method of perception of other people traits, lifestyle, technology and so on such as TV, internet and other information sources. For instance, people emotion and inner characteristics could not be transmitted by media and computer or internet could not be a suitable substitution for this matter. As a matter of fact, having a live conversation with a foreigner could obviously reveal emotion and insight.
Of course, in some cases traveling is not possible all the time, so an alternative way of collecting information about other countries could be sources of media. People watch TV program and acquire information about other people life and countries through websites without wasting handsome amount of money and time. However, all of them could not illustrate other people tradition and way of living appropriately and could be made-up. Some exemplary historical series that are made by some so-called countries are exaggerated version of reality.
To infer, it is transparently true that people are able to know about other nations through internet or various resources, though visiting countries directly could make better conception of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, for instance, in general, of course, such as, as a matter of fact, in some cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 340.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26764705882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29407602571 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91378272316 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.541176470588 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 555.3 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2999675417 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.928571429 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2857142857 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.345613889492 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.132900486416 0.084324248473 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803435431398 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.23146753455 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0527438187597 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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