Some people say that traveling abroad is the way to really learn about another country. However, other people say that it is not necessary to travel as we can find enough information about other countries on the TV or through the internet. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a growing debate on the abroad travel option to get a real view of the other side of the world. One thought of the school suggests that one can learn about another country on the social media. Another view is traveling aboard is the best way to know more detailed information about different countries. Personally, I believe that the overseas travel is a good choice to get better inside of another country over solely rely on other alternatives.
Due to globalization, with growing curiosity to learn more about the culture, customs and rituals of another country, people are frequently browsing the internet or watching global TV channels. Such sources provide in-depth information including lifestyle, accepted behavior, things that not appreciated in the form of documentary including someone's personal experience in that country. These details are enough to understand and visualize what kind of life people might be living in the country. In other words, from information provided in multiple ways, people make their own perspectives and opinions which need not be the real one.
On the other side, people who say that overseas trip is the great way to grasp the real facts of another country argue that there is plenty of opportunities to interact with foreigners and learn from observing their body language. Even though we read things theoretically, we learn more things by interacting with others. Interaction with others helps to learn practical things of life. Again, implementing the things learned from the internet into the daily routine helps us to reveal unknown concepts belonging to a new environment. Overall, it is solely possible to discover things to a great extent when we travel abroad by communicating with people.
In conclusion, in my opinion, the best way to learn real aspects of another country is to travel to that country as information floating on the other media do not provide adequate knowledge about that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18181818182 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78257623716 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.539184952978 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0221037542 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.071428571 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.388210739696 0.244688304435 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126350618482 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0629547931288 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236504899488 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0419851618356 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.