Many people believe that international tourism is a bad thing for their country. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to change this negative attitude towards international tourism?
While overseas tours with family and friends have become common vacation plan among all age groups, the handful of people argue that such kind of tourism needs to be discouraged for many reasons. Personally, I do not agree with this assertion because the international tourism is a backbone of the country's economy. By knowing the reasons for this negative attitude towards international tourism, we can take necessary steps to improve the situation to make things better.
People who say that it is a bad thing for their country, argue that respect for culture and a clean environment are compromised to a great extent by the host country. It is because before traveling to any country, tourists do not learn the culture, customs and ritual aspects of that country. As a result, unknowingly they might disrespect them, hurting emotions of the local crowd. For instance, In India, wearing footwear in Hindu Temples is considered as a disrespect to their cultural values. Moreover, many times foreigners do not follow the norms set by local authorities to keep the environment clean, polluting area near the tourist places with trash and harmful substances. Such contaminated places might not attract more tourists, impacting local community economically.
Even though these arguments are provided to prove how international tourism is bad, a government and tourist authorities need to take some measure to bring change in this attitude. The government needs to create awareness among local people about the benefits of international tourism in creating multiple job opportunities nearby and consequently, improving their financial status. Also, the government should work out on waste management chain policies involving citizens and tourist authorities to keep surrounding green and clean, which will attract more and more visitors. The money brought in by foreigners will bring a significant effect in many areas of the national economy.
Overall, lack of cultural awareness and absence of stringent rules on environmental sustainability are the main culprits creating a negative attitude among people, which can be changed by local government with the active support of local communities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, moreover, so, while, as to, for instance, kind of, as a result, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1860.0 1615.20841683 115% => OK
No of words: 341.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 5.45454545455 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29722995808 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93179169047 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58064516129 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 577.8 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.3582434384 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.857142857 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3571428571 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339420850197 0.244688304435 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104946653193 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104778493653 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189408513678 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112656855465 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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