TV commercials are increasing on daily basis. Businessmen depend on their advertisement for their successful launch of products. In my opinion, Advertisment are not beneficial to all divisions of people.
Firstly, products are shown with animation and graphics that attract people unknowingly and pushes them to buy product without knowing its background. However, they are beneficial in ways that help customer to learn about latest product available in market. Also, customer can easily understand the pros and cons of product by viewing the reality side of Advertisement. Finally, it reduces the shopkeepers responsibility to sell product with difficult marketing practices.
On contrast, commercials are viewed by all people including children. Honestly, they are unaware of quality issues faced by the contents of product. They are attracted by product Ad and force parents to buy ready made products. Moreover, this affects their health and their slowly developing organs. Products are certainly not 100% true as they are sold in Ads.
In conclusion, commercials are not worth and beneficial to public and it affect health of people. Instead of seeing one side of product in ads, people should goto market and buy products directly from retailer. This avoids quality issues and thus helps common people to avoid products which are misleading.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 217, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'about the latest'.
Suggestion: about the latest
...ial in ways that help customer to learn about latest product available in market. Also, cust...
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Line 3, column 395, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'shopkeepers'' or 'shopkeeper's'?
Suggestion: shopkeepers'; shopkeeper's
... Advertisement. Finally, it reduces the shopkeepers responsibility to sell product with dif...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'affects'?
Suggestion: affects
...t worth and beneficial to public and it affect health of people. Instead of seeing one...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, honestly, however, if, moreover, so, thus, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1149.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 209.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4976076555 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80221413058 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86999190798 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 176.041082164 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607655502392 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 342.0 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.834026836 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 76.6 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.9333333333 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0584714564775 0.244688304435 24% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234323742965 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0297618607098 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0440690900583 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288480485183 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 50.2224549098 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.03 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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