In recent years, people have more attention to watch sporting and cultural events rather than past. These entertaining events tickets are getting expensive as much as popular. Thereby, purchasing a lot of money to sporting and cultural events tickets has become a subject of debate. Although I believe that the advantages far outweigh the disadvantages.
On the one hand, when the big cultural or sporting events are being held in a city, you are not going only seeing for the events to the city. You want to sightseeing around the city, taste local foods and need accommodation while you stay. As a peak season, local businesses raise costs in short term to make more money and who attending these events have to bear these costs. Also, people might have negative thinking of the city. Therefore, It is not good effect to local businesses.
On the other hand, there are some advantages to make payment with a lot of money for events tickets. Firstly, the sports players or artists can get amazing attention during this events. This attention soon led to continuous attention and big supporting that can keep continue their sporting activities and art activities. Secondly, by hosting the events, a nation or city can prestige soar. For instance, South Korea, hosted the 2018 Olympic Winter Games. People all enjoyed the games and the games had finished successfully.
After discussing all the points mentioned above, I can finally conclude that purchasing expensive tickets to go to watch sports games and cultural events are worth and have good effects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, for instance, in short, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06589147287 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57816043785 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581395348837 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 400.5 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.1089929934 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6875 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.125 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272080586969 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0798684588916 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0675782746649 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161541121615 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415649413339 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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