Spending substantial amount on tickets depends on one's perception and behavior. Some people really enjoys such events and are not bothered about cost, the reason varies among them.
First, the money spend on such tickets will benefit both economically and socially, this will help artists and sportsman to showcase their talent.
Secondly, the person needs to experience the places and meet different people to understand their life style. Some time the experience can only be seen in reality.
Finally, some people have inner satisfaction to attend such events, monetary they are not bothered as this keep their passion fulfilled.
I see there is no harm in spending such events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, really, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 41.998997996 26% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 588.0 1615.20841683 36% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 109.0 315.596192385 35% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39449541284 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.231146315 4.20363070211 77% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49061870835 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 78.0 176.041082164 44% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715596330275 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 173.7 506.74238477 34% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.5033772467 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5714285714 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209614940608 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888004741828 0.084324248473 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353662688577 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109161052964 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278866495481 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 78.4519038076 41% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 22.4719101124 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 9
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