Some people think air travel should continue without any limit, others think governments should limit the number of flight.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is argued that governments should control the number of flight or continue the air travel without limit. This essay will discuss the both views and give a logical conclusion.
My view of continue the air travel without any limit is it brings lots of people to visit a country, include business visiting and tourist traveling. It further bring a country¡¦s economic up and open more employment opportunities for people like flight attendant, pilot, hotel staff and restaurant staff. The disadvantage of this is the living quality for local residents will be affected, some places will be over crowded by the visitors from other country.
In the other hand, if governments control the number of flight, the economic will stay at the average and the job opportunity will be open less for people. However, the positive side are people will have quality living life and the resources will not be overused by large quantity of visitors. So local people will not feel too stress for the crowd of people and low quality living life.
In conclusion, rather than unlimit flight access a country, I think that governments should set a limit number for flight. I believe that people would like to have a quality living life than a overcrowd lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 162, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'brings'?
Suggestion: brings
...iting and tourist traveling. It further bring a country¡¦s economic up and open more ...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...like to have a quality living life than a overcrowd lifestyle.
^
Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...like to have a quality living life than a overcrowd lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, i think, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1615.20841683 65% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97142857143 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58609573614 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 322.2 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.1887396226 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.4 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.316022675222 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.140157075171 0.084324248473 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.138387089408 0.0667982634062 207% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.233768823842 0.151304729494 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.139203378708 0.056905535591 245% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.06 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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