Some people think that the best way to succeed is to get a university education, while others di sagree and say that it is no longer true nowadays. Discuss both views and give your own opinions.
Many people argue that education completed through university is the only path to get success, while others say that it is proven false today. I agree with the latter statement. In this essay, I will discuss the arguments and explain the reason behind my rationale for optional university education along with few supporting examples.
To commence with, it is true that few decades ago in order get a job, the candidate was supposed to graduate from university doing particular course. The syllabus is set accordingly by the educational bodies to get practical and theoretical knowledge of each subject. For instance, the engineering course is arranged with the combination of laboratories and some lectures to get technically skilled. Moreover, passing the examinations certifies the completion of education with certain grades.
However, drop-outs can be successful in their career. There are few cases which prove otherwise. This is because there are other alternative courses in demand nowadays, which can qualify others to prosper too. Additionally, it also depends upon the quality factors such as leadership, confidence, and brave enough to take an opportunity. For instance, an uneducated tea seller is the Prime Minister of India today. Besides, if you are ambitious to achieve certain goal, you must go through their respective studies and clear the assessments.
To sum up, the success does not depend upon an education of university instead it makes an effort, hard-work, optimistic, and hunger to learn. It is true that, the measures of growth is the best way to get educated via University is presumably out of fashion now.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31800766284 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91827287181 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.647509578544 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.1732890907 49.4020404114 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.5333333333 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190040701088 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545414980384 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06449144593 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116335828347 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581446204569 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.28 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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