It is true that bicycles are riding by individuals whilest critics ponder that cars are preferred by masses. This will will articulate both of its views along with perspective.
To begin with, there are several reasons how people use bicycles? The first and foremost one is about good for health. To explain it, bicycles do not release any harmful gases which effect health of an individuals. Futhermore, now people are faced problem of obesity, riding by bicycles can reduce weight. To exemplify it, a survey was conducted by Oxford University resulted that 90% of masses use bicycles because of numerous health benefits. As a result, individuals using bicycles can get relaxed from worklaod that have no time to do exercise.
However, there are several reasons who preferred to driving a car? The predominant one is safe to travel. To elaborate it, using a car in a bad weather is better than by a bicycle. After that, it protect individuals to travel at night when people feel shiever. The headline of famous newspaper ' Moscow Times' revealed that 70% of masses feel free to travel in a car due to facilitates of air conditioning, protect from robbers. As a result, people went to driving a car due to living a comfort an luxiours life.
In conclusio, although cars are good to travel at night yet I believe that bicycles are best to protect form problems.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: jkataria
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, as a result, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1128.0 1615.20841683 70% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84120171674 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6764466047 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596566523605 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 363.6 506.74238477 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.176181667 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.2 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5333333333 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106523104759 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0388839300693 0.084324248473 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0339715259909 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0688179328921 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416749498542 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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