Some people think certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put Behind Bars. To what extend do you agree?
Nowadays, governments are being challenged by so many criminals in the cities. Some are you that search Criminal offenders should be forced to do mandatory work rather than being kept in cells. I, for one, strongly advocate the first view. This as I will discuss the benefits of this matter.
First of all, all some inmates can be so helpful to their society. Sometimes the best punishment for them be considered as unpaid compulsory work such as construction workers or basic computer related jobs as they can both regret what they have done due to not getting paid, and also, so learn new skills. In contrast, should they spend all of their time in jail, there will not be any benefits neither for the society no for the offenders themselves. As an example, a study conducted in Tehran in 2009, show that almost 75% of those ones who were obliged to work outside of the prison, never committed crime afterwards. The research was done by the investigation department of the police.
Furthermore, the less number of prisoners are in jails, the more fans are available to governments. As a consequence, the extra capital can be invested in other parts of the city building modern hospitals or improving the quality of education system. This would definitely benefit both the community and the inmates. Based on research conducted in Netherland, more and more of their prison buildings, have been turned into either public libraries or centers of educational research; Due to the fact that almost the majority of criminals have to work in the defined positions by the government.
To conclude, would absolutely be having them to do obligatory work in society which this could result in both raising capital to improve other respect of the community and to have skillful workers rather than only some prisoners.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 529, Rule ID: THESE_ONES[1]
Message: This phrase is probably grammatically incorrect. Write 'those' instead.
Suggestion: those
...Tehran in 2009, show that almost 75% of those ones who were obliged to work outside of the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, so, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9606557377 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68945205914 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580327868852 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 72.8726874174 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.57142857143 7.06120827912 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229037035424 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705523361874 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0765150544658 0.0667982634062 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143110085854 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0502315099285 0.056905535591 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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