Some people think that children should go to nursery schools before attending primary school, while others believe that is better for children to stay all day with their families. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
people have different concerns about whether children should be enrolled in preschool classes or not. Although there is some truth in claiming that preschool classes may have little negative impacts on children’s health and life, I am inclined to believe that such classes are essential for building up better personalities.
On the one hand, there are two principal causes why some people are against the idea of day-care schools; one of which is the hygienic aspect. To illustrate, not all nursery schools follow the standard hygienic measures; consequently, children might be susceptible to serious infections. For example, the recorded diarrhoea cases due to Ruta virus are 15% greater among children who attend nursery schools. An additional concern might be peer influence, by which a child could acquire inappropriate habits, such as lying. Therefore, it is not only children’s health that could be under threat but also their attitude.
despite the above arguments, I would side with those who support sending their youngsters to preschools. Initially, preschools are important for children in their formative years as these schools are considered to be a miniature of society so that they help improve children’s social interaction as well as their tolerance to accept others’ differences. Moreover, daycare classes participate in tackling some psychological issues, for instance, dyslexia, owing to the engagement of the children with other peers which help improving child’s abilities to talk without stuttering.
By way of conclusion, despite the notable adverse effects of joining preschool classes, I hold the notion that if children were enrolled in such classes, their chances to boost their social and mental abilities would considerably improve.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, well, for example, for instance, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64444444444 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05016134409 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640740740741 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.9958676263 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.545454545 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.260178751191 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937623572771 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.046204853672 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141922545608 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471674189783 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 13.0946893788 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.73 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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